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that menu already looks way, way better!
as to the gore, two things: it's odd that some of the traps kill you by teleporting you away and others do it by turning you into a bloody mess. I think one or the other would be better, both feels odd.
second thing, if you want it to be over-the-top super meat boy esque (which this game reminds me of a lot actually) then you need bigger gore explosions. if you look at how meat boy dies there's a blood explosion that's twice the size of his actual body. in comparison the ones in your game look smaller than the character.
edit: I will say though, with the sci-fi hyper robotic aesthetic you're going for the teleport effect feels more fitting.